An Elemental Competition: Heir of Storms by Lauryn Hamilton Murray

Posted July 28, 2025 by Wendy in Reviews / 0 Comments

An Elemental Competition: Heir of Storms by Lauryn Hamilton MurrayHeir of Storms by Lauryn Hamilton Murray
Series: Storm Weaver #1
on June 3, 2025
Genres: Fantasy
Pages: 416
Format: eARC
Source: Netgalley
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three-stars

RED QUEEN meets SHADOW AND BONE in this explosive start to a YA romantasy trilogy about dangerous magic, forbidden love, and a cut-throat competition for the throne in an empire where crowns are not inherited -- they're won.
The very day Blaze came into the world, she almost drowned it. A Rain Singer born into one of the most powerful fire-wielding families in the empire, Blaze's birth summoned a devastating storm that left thousands dead. She's been hidden away ever since with a dark secret: the same torrential power that branded her an outcast disappeared that fateful day. And sheโ€™s not sure she wants it back.
When an unexpected invitation arrives for Blaze and her twin brother, Flint, to compete as future rulers of the empire, sheโ€™s suddenly thrust into the limelight again -- and into battle. Threats abound at the Golden Palace, where intrigue and romance await with not one but two handsome suitors: the enchanting Crown Prince and a dangerously alluring newcomer at court.
As Blaze explores her untapped power, she discovers the throne may be within her grasp. But in order to take it, sheโ€™ll have to leave behind the stories that others have told about her, and find the courage to write her own.

I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Why did I read?

This YA fantasy touts a magical competition, elemental magic and compares it to Shadow and Bone — of course I was so there.

My thoughts:

Unfortunately, this one wasn’t quite the winner I wanted it to be.

I’m not sure if I disliked this more because I was also reading ANOTHER YA book where there was a competition and two princes and this was the inferior of the two… But there were times I thought I wanted to dnf this. I think the whole book felt very… Formulaic and predictable. I also thought the MC Blaze was a little dense. There were many incidences where I was like surely she’s put two and two together? No? Oh, okay.

There also seemed to be a lot of telling instead of showing and periods of what felt like info dumping especially in the beginning. However, there were aspects of the story and world that WERE interesting. I like the set up of the magic and their way of ranking power and rule. But even with the exciting ending (which is the only reason it’s above a 3 star), I don’t think I’ll be reading the sequel. Sometimes I can still be convinced to continue a sub-par first book in a series if there’s enough of a hook for the plot or enough of a draw with a character that I’m invested in, but unfortunately, just not the case for me with this one.

In Short…

There were a few glimpses of a captivating fantasy story but they were too few, and many of them didn’t happen until I slogged through a slow and formulaic first half. If you are a big fan of elemental magic, you may have better luck with this than I did.

Rating Report
Plot
three-half-stars
Characters
three-stars
Writing
three-stars
Pacing
three-stars
Overall: three-stars

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